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nagpo 02-03-2008 02:41 AM

How it feels
 
It's a cold lonely morning
And the days around
The corner
A little girl cries aloud

Someone she trusts felt her so wrong (so wrong)

How can she trust
The ones she loves?
When she was just used
As a tool for love

Psychological damage
Has been done (it's all just been done)

In a world
Where no one thinks aloud
The world is bound to lose a crown

Everyday it's all just the same
Such a game

(chorus part)
I know how it feels my baby
I know how it feels(feels)

I know nobody knows my baby
Sometimes suicides' ideal

And I don't know how I can go on my baby
And I know how it feels
How it feels(feels)
(end)

TrulyAmazing 02-09-2008 03:08 PM

Re: How it feels
 
very strong potery nagpo and i loved how you did,nt leave out any taboo topics very good it shows a bold writer i like that and my over all opion no one ever really wants to admit how they truly feel but how ever i feel all that in your wrting, awsome job nagpo and thanks for sharing your stuff

nagpo 02-10-2008 02:52 AM

Re: How it feels
 
well, thank u and ur welcome.


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