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HR2004
07-20-2005, 11:54 PM
Laying there side by side...
With our hands intwined...
Having this great love...
That never dies...
For it is for real...
And nothing can steal...
The happiness it gives...
The passion rising...
The urge unbearable...
All my strength is not enough to contain...
All this strain...
My affection...
Endless...
The kisses...
continious...
The Moment...
Waiting...
The touches...
Welcoming...
The warmth...
Inviting..
No way..
To stray...
Calling me...
Closer...
Making me go...
Where Ive always been afraid...
But in your arms...
I have no fears...
I could fly with you by my side...
So much happening all around no way...
To stop...
No words to utter...
Just gazing...
We know whats happening...
The passion burns...
But the place it takes us...
Peaceful and great...


I dont know what to call this one help me out I think its kinda everywhere!Idk

creedsister
07-21-2005, 01:12 AM
:) i was really sure that was beautiful ... :jam: :jam: i dont know about a title

Ann Allusion
07-22-2005, 04:58 AM
quite passionate...beautiful written....:jam:

how 'bout calling it...."Loving You"...just kind of how it struck me when i read it...just a thought... :)

creedsister
07-22-2005, 02:01 PM
yes Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that would be a good one too :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: