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Trimontana
05-29-2005, 09:10 PM
The emptiness of my voice
calling to anyone.
The memories of a life
that i wanna make back.
Feeling lonely in the
darkness of this body.
I just wanna go and
dont coming back

If for a minute
i could be there.
I would do things
in a different way
no hellos and no good byes.
Lossing myself in the memories.
Missing those streets at night.

Missing someone in my way
i found another instead.
I wanna go and dont coming back.
I wanna lose myself
in those memories
in those streets at night.

creedsister
05-29-2005, 10:34 PM
there is just something about those street lights :) i liked it Gabs

Trimontana
05-29-2005, 11:07 PM
thanks sister...those streets are NYC streets. i miss that city. the poem in general means all my feelings about i wanna leave this city and start again.

Ann Allusion
05-30-2005, 03:10 AM
nice writing, Trimontana. :)

Trimontana
05-30-2005, 10:05 AM
Thanks Ann

HR2004
05-31-2005, 01:38 PM
that was wonderful!