The Lucky One

[Dogstar]

Twilight is dawning
Another day sneaks away
The comfort of that shot
Dulls the ache in my heart

What will it take
To go with the flow
To ride the crest
To revel in the afterglow

As the stars fill the sky
I'm left to wonder why
I can't find the hole
That fits the key to my soul

What will it take
To catch the sun
To ride the crest
To be the lucky one

[creedsister]

liked it

[HR2004]

good one!

[Ann Allusion]

what will it take
to catch the sun
to ride that crest
to be the lucky one?

a preverbial question asked by all seekers one time or another...really liked this one... :) good bones for a song...:jam:

[Dogstar]

Thanks a lot, you guys. Someday, I hope turn some of this stuff into songs :D.