Home | Home | Home | Home | Home
A famous Kevin poem, it sucks as usual! [Archive] - CreedFeed Community

PDA

View Full Version : A famous Kevin poem, it sucks as usual!


MrSeeker
08-14-2004, 11:33 PM
I see your body, lifeless
Hanging before me
Knife in hand
Throat spewing crimson
Blood running from mouth
Into your heart
Looking into your eyes
I see no life inside
But tears chased by pain
Prying open your body
To reveal a broken heart
Beauty in its purest form
Soul escaping from body
I am in awe as you leave
I watch you fly to Heaven
And then plunge into Hell
Don't worry, my darling
My tears will drown out the sorrow.

creedsister
08-15-2004, 11:31 AM
Hey sucks as usual!!!!!!!! i know u did,nt give this one a title so i didnt have anything better todo si i gave it one for ya!!!!! Throat Spewing Crimson Blood Running From Mouth in to your heart !!!! Awsome Line That Line is what inspired the Title :D

Dogstar
08-15-2004, 07:15 PM
WOW, that is some heavy visual stuff! Great job!

MrSeeker
08-15-2004, 10:11 PM
Thanks much, hehehe... Just me messing around as usual. I've been writing a lot again and I got more up beat stuff then what I usually write. I'm sure all of you will enjoy it, atleast i hope. Me and Kim wrote one,but I dont know if I should post it because its up to her so maybe you guys will see it,maybe not. Welp, Im off. Much love

JulieCitySlicker
08-17-2004, 11:25 PM
I'm with Kerri on that wow ;)

MrSeeker
08-18-2004, 08:47 PM
Thanks Julie :D