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Rulesdontapply
07-20-2004, 08:32 PM
Can u feel it consuming or is it all to confusing
The emptiness it leaves behind
Questions it leaves burning your mind
The scars so deep and heavy
Loosing your blood so slow and steady
Bleeding dry what’s left of your heart
Slowly tarring your entire world apart
Breaking everything you try and make whole
Everything close to you
It doesn’t matter what u try and do
No matter who you are it finds you
Its never to early or late
Its all around you and in your fate
But I will never except it
I will only expect it
I can only learn to be ready
To feel it coming and learn to be steady
I feel that’s all we can ever do
So you learn from me and ill learn from you
You can only be ready
Learn to be ready

cjme
07-20-2004, 08:53 PM
beautiful

Ann Allusion
07-20-2004, 09:49 PM
very nice...

creedsister
07-20-2004, 10:28 PM
From the last lines of your poem Rules u sound like a great little helper like it :)

Dogstar
07-20-2004, 11:13 PM
Nice job, Rules...like the visuals.

HR2004
07-21-2004, 11:06 AM
that was reall good has alot of feeling in it