If

[Dogstar]

If I could I would
Do my part
Open my heart
Stoke the fire
Unleash my desire
If I could

If I could I would
Play the card
Let down my guard
Crash the wall
Answer the call
If I could

If I could I would
Cast the line
Claim what is mine
Live the dream
Capture the sunbeam
If I could

If I could I would
Proudly stand
Accept your hand
Fill the hole
Complete my soul
But I can’t

[creedsister]

well written,,,

[aussiecreeder]

well written,,,

yep well written, it has a good structure to it.

[Aimee]

Wow. I really really like that one. I want it to be longer. Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?

[creedsister]

Wow. I really really like that one. I want it to be longer. Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back? I dont know Aim, but i bet its a loooong story ;)

[Dogstar]

Hahahah, yeah, you could say that, creedsister ;)...Thanks for the kind words, you guys.

[Ann Allusion]

beautiful writing, dogstar...know the feeling...altho, there is always hope...ya think?...one can always have that... ;)

[TeriB19]

Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?
Not enough lime in da Corona!! :drunk2: :drunk2: :cheers: :drunk2:

[creedsister]

beautiful writing, dogstar...know the feeling...altho, there is always hope...ya think?...one can always have that... ;) HaHa like martin luther king said,,,LETS KEEP HOPE ALIVE

[Dogstar]

Not enough lime in da Corona!! :drunk2: :drunk2: :cheers: :drunk2:

Hehehehehehe...

Ann, yeah, I still have hope...sometimes ;). Glad you enjoyed it, though :)