onelastbreath cover

[titanguy9]

hey guys, i did a one last breathe cover, and i would like you guys to hear it.

http://titanguy3.dmusic.com

i posted it on another guitar site and some didnt even bother to listen to it. they just sayed it sucked because it was creed.

[Higher_Desire]

Is there any way you can make it into an mp3? When I went to download it, it told me it was an m3u, and my computer won't play those for some reason.


H-D :thumbsup:

[titanguy9]

it is an mp3?? you dont have to download it just click the lil grey arrow to play it.

[Rune]

ok i'll put this as direct as i can, no butter, no salt, straight truth:

you need to listen to the song over and over again.

Next try playing it with the song as closely as possible

Listening to your recording, aside from the atrocious sounding instrument doing the vocal melody (just try doing the actual guitar part for now), it seems that you don't know the rhythm of the song very much at all.

You seem to know the notes, just not how they all fit together, go back to the song and listen, then try again.

[creedtri]

LOL, that was some funny ****! Man i'm sorry but you just suck!
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[RMadd]

i'll agree w/ rune... it doesn't suck, b/c i sure as hell couldn't do that... but it does need some work

[titanguy9]

heck ya guys, plz critic me, except for the dude that said i suck. Whats up with that??? were all family here. Ive been gettin alot that it needs to be smoothers, and i hate the farting vocals, but hey i think im the first to do this on here or am i?

[titanguy9]

So you guys want me to do a just guitar version???i get on it ans see what you guys think. peace.

[Trees of Wisdom]

heck ya guys, plz critic me, except for the dude that said i suck. Whats up with that??? were all family here. Ive been gettin alot that it needs to be smoothers, and i hate the farting vocals, but hey i think im the first to do this on here or am i?

The farting vocals or the cover of "One Last Breath"?

[titanguy9]

the vocals on my cover sound like farts

[RMadd]

i'd suggest working on the guitar only, first, once you get that down pat (by that, i mean "very good"), then work on the vocals... like i said earlier, rune's got good suggestions, i agree w/ them, i'm just too lazy to repeat 'em

[titanguy9]

are any of you guitar players?

[RMadd]

i'm not

[Pipster]

it doesnt sound great right now, but if you work on your rythm a little and get rif of the flute or whatever that is and have someone with a decent voice sing it...it will rock!!!!!
Pete

[creedtri]

Sorry man I didn't mean to be rude. But I just thought you were joking with this mp3. LOL my bad
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[creedtri]

I play guitar. I'll try and get somthing up for you guys to hear.
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[Mr. Prophet Man]

ok i'll put this as direct as i can, no butter, no salt, straight truth:

you need to listen to the song over and over again.

Next try playing it with the song as closely as possible

Listening to your recording, aside from the atrocious sounding instrument doing the vocal melody (just try doing the actual guitar part for now), it seems that you don't know the rhythm of the song very much at all.

You seem to know the notes, just not how they all fit together, go back to the song and listen, then try again. i had to quote rhune, but nice try man... oh and if you can try to adjust your distortion

[CollectiveSoul]

yea I am, ive been playing for a few years. IT wasn't THAT bad. it was merely oay. I think its you trying to learn the song as fast u can that is making it not so smooth. You need to learn at a slower pace man, theres no deadline, just learn two measures at a time very slowly because its the fingerstylwe part and keeping working on it. It doens't matter if it takes you 6 monthes as long as you know it.

[shiver]

Well, from what I hear you got the notes, you just need to slow down. Work on strumming too. For me to listen to it, it sounds, and I;m not trying to be rude, but it sounds like you don't really have an ear for the music. Some do some don't. I have a friend who also plays, and when he tries to cover other people's songs he doesn't sound good, but when he does his own thing he sounds good and solid. Just keep working hard and it'll come to you. Good luck.