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Aimee
04-06-2004, 02:06 PM
By: Amy Aumick 2004
Why do my lips
Burn to Confess
All the sins
I have yet to commit?
Perhaps it is easier to
Ask for forgiveness,
Than Permission.
SCOTTSMYMAN
04-06-2004, 04:33 PM
That was great Amy. Dare I say a little on the sexy side. I love the poems that say the most with so few words. :clap:
Dogstar
04-07-2004, 03:50 AM
Those first two lines are killer, Amy! Awesome job, as usual!
TeriB19
04-07-2004, 10:56 AM
:clap: :clap: :clap: I like it. Short, to the point, and impacting.
creedsister
04-07-2004, 11:31 AM
you better go straight For Forgivness Skip the premisson, Part, haha, Im really in to your Stuff Aim, but i found this one funny in a way,
Aimee
04-07-2004, 03:39 PM
Yes, Sister... It is about the fact that we are all sinners on this earth. I don't care how perfect you try to be there is no one human being perfect. That I am forgiven before I even sin is truly a delerious pleasure to me. Mistakes suck, but they help us learn. Thanks for the comments, y'all. Sexy, yes...just a hint. ;)
creedsister
04-07-2004, 10:25 PM
i know its weird girl but i here what your saying, Rock on!!!!
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