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MrSeeker
02-12-2004, 02:06 AM
This was written by me and Kim (Torn Signs)

"The crescent moon a pale amber,
The night air so quiet and cold
I quaver reminiscing the past as I try to comprehend what has happened.
To the part of me that was so bold
My inner core that could face the lies and the deception,
Of all that I try so hard to hide,
It is released when my control is debilitated, when my expectations cower before my emotions
Im overwelmed because everyone will know I lied,
The will know once my fist places itself in the other soul's chest,
This reminscince gives no rest
The agony of which I now feel, is as if my skin was to peel
I will make that soul pay every day for taking all my liberty and justice away
I will curse this anguish for all the days, for my sorrow will surely be taken away one day,
The relevance of the situation matters not, as I'm not a ransacked cot
The fact that I cant hide anymore is more then I can take, This moments thats been building up is going to have me break,
All the faith I had in becoming somebody rushes away with the Black Sea,
I now only look at the other soul with a maniac glee,
All the panic in the creature will cause it to a flee, But this isn't just some sort of mad entity, this is my inner demon."


Edit: The good parts are done by Kim.

creedsister
02-12-2004, 12:36 PM
wow guys that was great it was about time kev you and kim wrote something togethear dont ya think!!!!hehe ;)

MrSeeker
02-12-2004, 12:58 PM
Hahaha,on behalf of me and Kim,thanks!
Im sure Kim will post too,but Im just thanking you on her behalf right now ;)

MrSeeker
02-12-2004, 01:03 PM
Oh! Ta,would you like to join my newsletter?
just give me your email and I'll add ya ;)

Torn Signs
02-12-2004, 04:46 PM
Edit: The good parts are done by Kim.


lol, funny, yeah right. You did better then me on this. :D

MrSeeker
02-12-2004, 09:41 PM
Kim,
What are you nuts!?!?! no way! You were way better then me!!!

Dogstar
02-13-2004, 01:43 AM
Wow, very cool collaboration.

Love this one:

The fact that I cant hide anymore is more then I can take, This moments thats been building up is going to have me break

MrSeeker
02-13-2004, 03:08 AM
Thanks :D