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MrSeeker
02-06-2004, 02:18 AM
I wrote this and "Love of the Knife" at the exact same time. so yea, hope you like it :D
Chaos

"Here in this chaos,I feel as if Im lost
Im walking blind and falling behind
And with every breath Im getting closer to death
Im hoping for my friend to come help me out again
My only friend, the very end

This world of chaos is breaking me
This world of chaos is killing me

Chaos is all around and I cant hear a sound
All I feel is pain, I wish I could scream your name
Im bound and tide to some rope,without life and without hope
I cant see anything to set me free
Im dead is what Im told, I feel like it because Im so cold

This world of chaos is breaking me
This world of chaos is killing me

This cold world of chaos is dead inside!!!"

SleeplessAngel
02-06-2004, 02:26 AM
Very good! :cool:

MrSeeker
02-06-2004, 02:28 AM
Thanks alot :D

Torn Signs
02-06-2004, 07:50 AM
From what you did last night that I read, this has enveloped out well.
The end is a little light from the rest, but it's alright. Good job. ;) It's make an excellent song.

MrSeeker
02-06-2004, 05:56 PM
Thanks alot Kim :D

Dogstar
02-07-2004, 11:20 AM
NICE...Love this line:
Im walking blind and falling behind

MrSeeker
02-07-2004, 03:07 PM
Thanks :D