Punished

[Sincirr]

Punished

Punish me with your ignorance,
Judge me with a closed mind.
A friend is a friend.
Sposed to accept every part.
I can do that, guess U cant cos
U dont know unconditional acceptance,
so U cant give it.

But why cant U accept that I am a human being!
And U can speak your mind, but I am silenced?
Muzzle your mouth or else you lose a friend!

Should have known better.
Why did I bother with yet another who
Judges with pre-programmed arguments.
Doesn’t see U 4 who U are.
Of course it’s doomed 4 failure!
Here comes the proverbial rejection.
Here comes the hurt. OK,Fine. U wont be the last.

I would like to have friends.
Friends who dont judge every word I say.
Friends who trust and dont run away
when I finally express my life freely.
When I do up go your insecurity walls
I’m cut off, every integrity ignored.
From there on, categorized as one with
a conservative closed mind.

You have absolutely no idea.
I AM free.
I HAVE an open mind.
Open to the one who made it, closed to the one who destroys it.
This is wisdom. U know nothing, but I’m
Punished by your ignorance.
Lost another friend.

Punished with your ignorance,
Judged with a closed mind.

[Dogstar]

Wow, Sincirr, great stuff!

I would like to have friends.
Friends who dont judge every word I say.
Friends who trust and dont run away
when I finally express my life freely.

Powerful verse.

[creedsister]

wow sincirr i can relate to all of those things Really,,,nice u keep it up :D

[Sincirr]

Tah.

[Torn Signs]

excellent job, especially with keeping the flow throughout it all. Keep it up.

[creedsister]

Tah. HAHA

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was very good sincirr ;)

[Sincirr]

Thanks for all the encouragement. I dont seem to be able to write in neat stanzas or whatever U call em. It just comes out. I must say that that ongoing poem that U guys are doing is amazing! I cant believe U guys can just flow like that, its pretty amazing what U are coming up with.

[creedsister]

Thanks for all the encouragement. I dont seem to be able to write in neat stanzas or whatever U call em. It just comes out. I must say that that ongoing poem that U guys are doing is amazing! I cant believe U guys can just flow like that, its pretty amazing what U are coming up with. yep i know i love the ongoing poem thing its just sooo like me love it Great idea in stuff