Continiuos Poem from Creed Members

[Torn Signs]

Ok, this is an idea I got from a poem site. One of us starts a poem and others post and continue with it. Since I'm only capable of dark, someone else can start it and then other's can continue w/ it, even if it gets funny or awkward...sound fun? Hope so, have an awesome day everyone one!! ;)

[creedsister]

To weak To cry to strong to die Im sick of the world and all its Lies~~~ :)

[Torn Signs]

Tears from the sky fall from the skies above as the thought of mercy falls down with the thought of the lies.

[creedsister]

inside i dye but lies will always be the reason that tears fall from the sky but i have learned why the reason why the heaveans cry

[Torn Signs]

It's just an ongoing clamber of raindrops on my outside porch, an ongoing sound of dread, with no answers.

[creedsister]

raindrops echos inside my head to remind me of the pain sometimes i feel i have lost more than i have gained but for now the anwsers will remain the same

[Torn Signs]

Nothing are they, not a sound, not a presence, not an act, the answers remain nothing.

[MrSeeker]

Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear,they take there toll
There empty droplets,nothing more
They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure

(was that ok? i have no clue what im doing,haha)

[Aimee]

dripping, drowning
turn me around
swirl my existence
bury my crown

[Dogstar]

Drilling deeper
Endless hole
Bloodless keeper
Stare so cold

[WeatheredWoman]

Darker,
deeper,
Final hour near,
Send those eyedrops made of fear
gave them such fragile wings...
Send them up to heaven,
but heaven was just too high,
I watch them falter against the sky

[Torn Signs]

they falter and fall as if they are ancients, as if they know all about the world,
yet they don't understand

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

They don't understand the journey we take,
As we walk through this land
The pain we all feel
That's written in the sand

[creedsister]

i walk alone from were i stand theres no one there to hold my hand so i will keep my voice silent as it makes know sound

[creedsister]

Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear,they take there toll
There empty droplets,nothing more
They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure

(was that ok? i have no clue what im doing,haha) your doing ok REALLY

[Aimee]

In the darkness
this moment near birth
Soon my voice will roar
With the first light I see
On earth...
I will soar.

[Aimee]

Too weak to cry
Too strong to die
I’m sick of the world and all its Lies
Tears from the sky
Fall from the skies above
As the thought of mercy falls down
With the thought of the lies.
Inside I die
But lies will always be the reason
That tears fall from the sky
But I have learned why
The reason why the heavens cry.
It's just an ongoing clamber of raindrops on my outside porch,
An ongoing sound of dread, with no answers.
Raindrops echos inside my head
To remind me of the pain
Sometimes I feel I have lost more than I have gained
But for now the answers will remain the same
Nothing are they, not a sound, not a presence,
Not an act, the answers remain nothing.
Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear, they take their toll
They’re empty droplets,
Nothing more
They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure
Dripping, drowning
Turn me around
Swirl my existence
Bury my crown
Drilling deeper
Endless hole
Bloodless keeper
Stare so cold
Darker,
Deeper,
Final hour near,
Send those eyedrops made of fear
gave them such fragile wings...
Send them up to heaven,
but heaven was just too high,
I watch them falter against the sky
They falter and fall as if they are ancients,
As if they know all about the world,
Yet they don't understand
They don't understand the journey we take,
As we walk through this land
The pain we all feel
That's written in the sand
I walk alone from were I stand
There’s no one there to hold my hand
So I will keep my voice silent as it makes no sound
In the darkness
This moment near birth
Soon my voice will roar
With the first light I see
On earth…
I will soar.


(Sounds good eh?)

[Torn Signs]

(does to me)

[DangerousDan85]

sandwiches are beautiful
sandwiches are fine
i love sandwiches
i eat them all the time

[creedsister]

(does to me) me2

[creedsister]

you dont see me bleed you dont see me dye on the inside why do i even try must i turn my self inside out why must i stand in bewtween doubt

[Torn Signs]

Why must I for one second believe it may be possible, but then the chain snaps and pulls me back to reality? You don't see me weep over what has been lost. You don't see me suffer under all the pain I have sacrificed myself to. You don't see me stand between truth and doubt.

[Torn Signs]

sandwiches are beautiful
sandwiches are fine
i love sandwiches
i eat them all the time
They are big and small,
Juicy and fat,
These sandwhiches,
That I think about all the time.

[creedsister]

Why must I for one second believe it may be possible, but then the chain snaps and pulls me back to reality? You don't see me weep over what has been lost. You don't see me suffer under all the pain I have sacrificed myself to. You don't see me stand between truth and doubt. THAT WAS SHORT BUT SO TRUE AND IT WAS KILLER SORRY IM MESSING UP THE THREAD

[Torn Signs]

HELP-so confused on this thread! :wtf:

[WeatheredWoman]

They are big and small,
Juicy and fat,
These sandwhiches,
That I think about all the time.

So I waste my time,
with sandwich-dreaming
A sparkling wine,
A twist of lime,
A whisky soda,
hole in time...

[creedsister]

:confused: HELP-so confused on this thread! :wtf:what else is new kim ;)

[WeatheredWoman]

Just take your time,
to make up your mind,
Draw a line
or flip a dime..
Waiting for you


:) ;) :)

[creedsister]

I drew a line a long time a go a little stronger now i know how but i dont know when only time well tell it never lies

[WeatheredWoman]

When you're stuck in the middle,
can't solve the riddle...
Questioning: is there any hope in hell?
Know that time will heal,
So I guess time will tell...

[creedsister]

time holds All truth of old and new it will not lie noir will it ever dye some pain is way to deep to heal and time has never been on its side but time is on my side and yours but why do i feel like time is sliping away

[WeatheredWoman]

Now this time to wonder,
now this time to heal...
Time to let it all come down,
but I don't know what I feel

[creedsister]

I feel the same but i know what i feel at times i just dont know how to deal

[Torn Signs]

How to do with that dreadful pain,
or how to do with those long gone burden days,
I don't even know how to deal with that time that gives me the wonders...

[creedsister]

So much pain so much confusion all lyes behind a ouestion called why hold on real tight you wont loose the fight i got it all but it all cant come out a once or it would be mistaken or it could mislead hold on i no longer doubt no more