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njcreedite
01-07-2004, 10:24 PM
I tried to write but no use
as I think and think
Perhaps it would help if I
drank a small drink
So the drink that I drank
was a drink that was pink
But so much did I drink
that now I can't think
I'd thank the drink maker
of the drink that I drank
But I think that the drink
has now maken me drunk
So no more shall I write
I can't think and I stink
Of the drink that I drank
that was some ugly pink
njcreedite
01-07-2004, 10:26 PM
Okay..I know it's silly. Souldancer sent me some Dr. Suess stuff and ever since his verses have been flowing in my head. Okay..so The Garden of Pain was a bit dark..and now I'm writing silly verse about drinking (which I do very little of..). You folks must think I'm a bit psycho.
Dogstar
01-07-2004, 10:30 PM
LMFAO. That is terrific, njcreedite!!!
creedsister
01-07-2004, 11:03 PM
All i can say you must have been drunk :cool:
TeriB19
01-07-2004, 11:20 PM
Linda, I'm LMAO, that was hysterical. I LOVED it!!! Very Suessical and very very good.
that was good certainly different to any previous dark peices, gave me a laugh!
Aimee
01-08-2004, 02:05 PM
I was hoping by the title that this would be a funny one.... it is!
Girl, can you dedicate that poem to me?
njcreedite
01-08-2004, 09:03 PM
I was hoping by the title that this would be a funny one.... it is!
Girl, can you dedicate that poem to me?
Consider it yours! :D
njcreedite
01-08-2004, 09:07 PM
All i can say you must have been drunk :cool:
Nope...just bored. I was sitting outside of my daughter's school waiting for her to return from her swim meet....They ran late, got stuck in traffic etc..so I waited for her and hour and a half. Plus it takes me an hour and a half each way to get to the dopey place. BOREDOM does strange things to people. I was reading a book and this dopey verse got in my head...so I took out my pad and out it came, sounding inane, but truely insane. It came into my brain like a quick summer rain...UGH!!!!!! I can't stop! :rolleyes:
Dogstar
01-08-2004, 09:11 PM
LMFAO!!! You're having such fun with this, hehehe.
SCOTTSMYMAN
01-09-2004, 09:53 AM
:laugh: :roll: I loved it Linda and I just really needed to laugh right now ! Thank you!
njcreedite
01-09-2004, 10:51 PM
:laugh: :roll: I loved it Linda and I just really needed to laugh right now ! Thank you!
Hey, I aim to please :D
it's like climbing up trees
so fun it seems to be
climbing up trees
whenever you please
:scared: oh God...some one stop me!!!! :eek:
Sheila63
01-10-2004, 07:29 PM
Linda, I think it's great. I LOVE it too. :D
Torn Signs
01-13-2004, 05:25 PM
You deserve an A+ for being able to revert from serious and dark to this awesome hilarious poem!
njcreedite
01-14-2004, 07:27 PM
You deserve an A+ for being able to revert from serious and dark to this awesome hilarious poem!
It's called...multiple personalities.... :psyche:
Ahhhh, wonder which poem depicts the real me?
I'll never tell. :paperbag:
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