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MrSeeker
12-30-2003, 02:29 AM
"Morbid is this,
This disease that haunts our nation,
Self mutilation

I cut away,hoping I forget yesterday!!!
I cut away,hoping it all goes away!!!
I bleed to feed the coals that only bring me more pain!!!
I bleed and wish it all away,all the hate inside of me!!!

Cut!!! Bleed!!! Scream!!!

Morbid is this,
This disease that eats away at me!!!
Self mutilation

I look at the penetration and see the past slowly bleed away!!!
I turn away and curse today

Cut (me)!!! Bleed (Crimson)!!! Scream (my name)!!!

I look at the penetration and see the past slowly bleed away!!!
I look inside and see myself slowly fade away..."


I just wrote that second ago, hope ya's like it :D
It was inspired by the people that hurt themselve's each day trying to take their pain away.

creedsister
12-30-2003, 02:37 AM
killer At one time i was cutter and i went to tanning beds to hide the scars it never worked untill one fine day god took theme all away completley``id call it cut the pain away :)

Creed_Defaultgirl
12-30-2003, 03:21 PM
Awsome! That was really, really good! This is definantly a sad world, huh.

MrSeeker
12-30-2003, 04:54 PM
Thanks! :D
Ta,
Thats sad to hear that you used to cut yourself,but its good God changed you. Well,that is an awesome title,but I think I want to keep it untitled,but yea, thats def. an awesome title :D
I actually cut myself a couple times and found out that my friend cut her wrist,so i kinda wrote it because of that...Im not gonna cut myself again(i hope)

creedsister
12-30-2003, 05:55 PM
I Hope :( !!

MrSeeker
01-01-2004, 08:53 PM
I guess this isnt as good as my other stuff...

creedsister
01-01-2004, 09:04 PM
i thought it was Good :D

MrSeeker
01-01-2004, 09:30 PM
Thanks, which was your favorite out of the ones I've written?

creedsister
01-01-2004, 09:46 PM
the things that should be~`the beautiful tragdey,,~Hold me in Darkness~

MrSeeker
01-01-2004, 10:17 PM
Yea,those are my favorite one's too :D

creedsister
01-01-2004, 10:22 PM
you know i love all your stuff but i thought it was like a trick question,,HaHa ;)

MrSeeker
01-01-2004, 10:27 PM
Awww,thanks :D
No,it wasnt a trick question,i just was wondering,hehe
Well,i g2g for now,ttyl ;)

creedsister
01-01-2004, 10:35 PM
word later kev :D

Alter Shredder
01-01-2004, 11:35 PM
that was awesome!! (not all the actual cutting) but it works on so many levels.

MrSeeker
01-02-2004, 02:38 AM
Thanks man

Ta,
awww,you called me kev,hehe. You can call me kev all you want ;)

creedsister
01-02-2004, 12:11 PM
Thanks man

Ta,
awww,you called me kev,hehe. You can call me kev all you want ;) HaHa ok :D