As I Bleed

[MrSeeker]

"Deafened by a cry, a sigh, and a bleeding heart
Blinded by a light, a gasp, and a broken heart

Haunted by words that cut away at me
Tourmented by things that you couldnt let be

As I cry,hold me
As I bleed,hold me

Once upon a midnight blue
Death will come and comfort you
Death will soon take me away
And on my way down
I will hear the sound of darkness coming to take me home.

...death come comfort me
Whisper in my ear
What it would be like if I wasnt here

As I cry
As I die
As I bleed, hold me"

Here's somthing I wrote around the same time
I wrote "The Beautiful Tragedy". Just felt like posting it now.
Oh, an update on me for the people wondering,
I am doing much better. Thank you all for your thoughts and prayers :)

[creedsister]

that was moving,,really liked it,,im glad you feel better in stuff :)

[MrSeeker]

Thanks Ta :D

[creedsister]

I like ~`death comfort me whisper in my ear what it would be like if i wasnt here~`your welcome

[MrSeeker]

Yea,Im glad you liked it

[creedsister]

Word ;)

[MrSeeker]

Hahaha

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was really good Kevin :)

[Creed_Defaultgirl]

It was, I really liked that! Keep it up, I like to read them!

[MrSeeker]

Thanks, Im about to put up another thing I just wrote a second ago :D

[Creed_Defaultgirl]

Yeah, I just read it. It was awesome!

[MrSeeker]

Thanks,Im glad you liked it :D

[Dogstar]

I'm glad to hear you are doing better, MrSeeker! I'll still keep you in my prayers :).

Nice poem, by the way. Love this part:
"Haunted by words that cut away at me
Tourmented by things that you couldnt let be"