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mushroomy2k
12-11-2003, 08:34 AM
Come Together
Come together in the midnight sun,
come together for we are one.
Bound in love we press are faces,
bound in love we've left the traces.
For tommorow there is no hurry,
in after glow the time is now.
we sleep somehow,only God knows
what we lack,
only God can hold us back.

Diane F

creedsister
12-11-2003, 09:57 AM
That one,may have been,short,but very deep,i really like the last line only god can hold us back,,good one

SCOTTSMYMAN
12-11-2003, 10:20 AM
Nice poem! Sometimes the shorter ones say it all!!

creedsister
12-11-2003, 10:29 AM
Nice poem! Sometimes the shorter ones say it all!! thats so true,,,

Creed_Defaultgirl
12-13-2003, 11:46 PM
thats so true
Yup, sometimes long ones just get boring! I've got this big poetry book and sometimes I catch myself thinking, when is this gonna end?! If it's got enough emotions, and the writer keeps it exciting, I like it! As for this poem, IT'S GREAT! Luv it!

PaulMcCoygirl
06-08-2004, 12:52 PM
Short and to the point. I like it!! :)

creedsister
06-08-2004, 01:40 PM
HaHa Im Still Down With That One :jam: :jam: :jam:

Torn Signs
06-13-2004, 01:00 AM
Great. I love the boldness in it and the power.

mushroomy2k
08-10-2008, 10:48 PM
wow i can't believe this site is still here and i actually remembered my password.and all my old post are here still.awsome

TrulyAmazing
08-12-2008, 05:07 PM
wow i can't believe this site is still here and i actually remembered my password.and all my old post are here still.awsome
Yep AND STILL HOLDING TO THE ONE THAT KNOWS GLORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY great to see ya old girl :hugs: :hugs: its fun to revisted potery

mushroomy2k
08-12-2008, 07:34 PM
Yep AND STILL HOLDING TO THE ONE THAT KNOWS GLORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY great to see ya old girl :hugs: :hugs: its fun to revisted potery
great to see ya old girl -am definetly that;) lol but won't we all be one day. hugs to you too.have a good evening.

TrulyAmazing
08-14-2008, 07:21 PM
great to see ya old girl -am definetly that;) lol but won't we all be one day. hugs to you too.have a good evening.
AMEN Choose this day who ye shall serve RICH OUT AND GRAB just has hard now ;) as it will be then I ASURE YA thanks you :hugs: