Eye Of The Apple

[Dogstar]

Eye of the apple
Rotting to the core
Black desert rose
Withering unsure
Cracks and lines
Corners they flood
Too many times misunderstood

Used to be the star that shined
Stage has left you far behind
Bereft of spirit fleeting glow
Youth now stolen can’t let go

Seeds of new life
So long ago sewn
Grew unwieldy
Left wisdom unknown
Took a wrong turn
Lured by lust
Spread too thin was the fairy dust

Used to be the star that shined
Now you’re not so much inclined
Watch as others take the bait
Youth now stolen can’t fool fate

[creedsister]

Used to be the star that shined,stage as left you far behind,,That was moving,,,really good,,Dogstar

[MrSeeker]

Wow ,another awesome poem!!!

[Dogstar]

Thanks, guys!

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was good Dogstar :)

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

:clap: :clap: Another wonderful poem Kerri!

[Sheila63]

Awesome poem, Dogstar. :D You're poems are so descriptive, I can really feel the different emotions you write about.

[PaulMcCoygirl]

Great poem Dogstar! Keep 'em coming!

[Dogstar]

Thanks tons, you guys! :)

[TeriB19]

Excellent!! You are THAT GOOD!!!!

[Creed_Defaultgirl]

Awesome poem, Dogstar. :D You're poems are so descriptive, I can really feel the different emotions you write about.

Yeah, exactly what Sheila said!

[Dogstar]

*blushes* Thanks, you guys.