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Alter Shredder
12-04-2003, 10:35 PM
Downfall, trapped in a cycle
blamed for everything
The raw and untamed
break way to suffering

Lifeless, we act on a moment
Freedom, and illusion

Taken for granted,
left listless in the world
trampled on,
are the ones who are given
the mistaken identity

left behind, blending into the shadows.
wanting more, but outwardly conent
with the bottom of the barrel.
why do let them walk over you?

Lifeless, we act on a moment
Freedom, and illusion

Taken for granted,
left listless in the world
trampled on,
are the ones who are given
the mistaken identity

Its time to fight back,
regain the name,
your society took away.

Bring what you have,
show us all, show us your true colors
no more hiding in the wall

MrSeeker
12-04-2003, 10:58 PM
Good :D

creedsister
12-04-2003, 11:03 PM
Again the world sucks,,,Good stuff iced

Dogstar
12-05-2003, 09:07 PM
Great stuff, Iced...I really liked this line:

left behind, blending into the shadows.
wanting more, but outwardly conent

Many times I have felt this way.

lifelovesoul
12-06-2003, 01:45 AM
cool like the poem, very true, very true
yes, creedsister, at times life is wicked.
and I just can't see the light
a silver lining sometimes isn't enough
to make some wrong seem right...
I could just keep going but I won't, even though for some reason I want to.

creedsister
12-06-2003, 11:25 AM
i know it does,,but as long as we dont give up we may feel like were dying at times,,but as long as we keepgoing on,, were going to make it if give up we die,,peace

PaulMcCoygirl
12-10-2003, 10:00 PM
Nice!