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Creed_Defaultgirl
11-22-2003, 03:15 AM
Deep inside where it dies
Beneath all you pride
All your lies
Roads taken now forgotten
Took the wrong turn maybe you'll learn
Before you feel the burn
Feel the tears in your throat
Know why they choke
The fear, the hope, the love
Gentelness gives a hard shove
You try to get under controll
But deeper digs that hole in your soul
From behind comes confidence, anger, and laughter
But should that really matter?
Maybe confession will throw a rope
So you can climb out your bottomless slope
Are you forgiven
Or only hidden?
Who's to speak of your last breath?
Who's to know your hate, crime, and death?
Mankind is sure to deceive
Causing our hearts' to bleed
We tend to cheat so we do not lose
But isn't that losing within itself, you choose
Were all wrapped up in our winns
Not to notice all these sins
As it keeps surrounding
Soon you'll be drowning
The reflection reaching for you above you pool
To you is only a tool
A house keeper unable to clean
The bully who's afraid to be mean
A chef without his knife
Is this really your perspective of life?
Well, my friend, I suggest judge your views
From someone elses shoes.

Dogstar
11-22-2003, 03:37 AM
Wow, nice job...a range of emotions in that one. Excellent! I especially like the line, Maybe confession will throw a rope. Very nice!

creedsister
11-22-2003, 09:15 PM
i like the part were mankind is sure to decevie,,,good one

MrSeeker
11-22-2003, 09:42 PM
nice!!!

Creed_Defaultgirl
11-22-2003, 10:38 PM
Thanks guys. You're all so kind, I've felt very welcomed at the board!

Siana
11-30-2003, 08:59 AM
nice