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Dogstar
11-20-2003, 04:12 AM
Delusion

Didn’t mean to cry last night
I found the answer, got it right
I saw you drifting, didn’t ask
Now you’re gone, can’t get past

The other day I heard our song
Made me think you had it wrong
Why’d you have to pay the price
For falling hard upon the ice

Others see through foggy eyes
Stumble forward, no disguise
So unfair you couldn’t see
Delusion kept you far from free

Didn’t mean to cry last night
I found the answer, got it right
I saw you slipping, didn’t try
Now you’re gone, dusk is nigh

At the lake we sometimes talk
Bait in hand, the fish you stalk
Behind the wheel, young and smug
Crashed the wall, a hole you dug

Swore I saw you in a dream
Flashed that smile, so sure you seemed
Don’t you cry, you said so sweet
The angels take good care of me

Didn’t mean to cry last night
I found the answer, got it right
I saw you happy, so I thought
Now you’re gone, peace you bought

creedsister
11-20-2003, 01:33 PM
KILLER

creedsister
11-20-2003, 01:34 PM
KILLER

Dogstar
11-21-2003, 02:45 AM
Thanks, creedsister! :)

hide
11-21-2003, 06:17 AM
great stuff can you sing? if so find yourself a band!

Dogstar
11-21-2003, 03:12 PM
LOL, hide, thank you...I can sing some, but not good enough for a band, hehehe.

SCOTTSMYMAN
11-21-2003, 06:15 PM
Another awesome poem Kerri! LOVED IT!!!!

Creed_Defaultgirl
11-22-2003, 12:20 AM
Well, find people that can play, but can't write! LOL
That was completely awesome!

Dogstar
11-22-2003, 12:41 AM
LOL, thanks so much Creed_Defaultgirl.

Creed_Defaultgirl
11-22-2003, 12:48 AM
Your very welcome Dogstar! Cool avatar!

Dogstar
11-22-2003, 12:52 AM
Heh, thanks...:D

Creed_Defaultgirl
11-22-2003, 12:59 AM
Yeah, snoopy rocks!