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The Lithium
10-19-2003, 02:32 PM
Right folks...This is my newest lyric. I've write it for Emelie, you might know about her...(my girlfriend). I wrote it yesterday....She liked it! :D I think it's at least okay...anyway....her it is!


And if your tears had a home
Would it be my eyes?
And if your soul had to run
Would it be to my heart?
And if your smile had an end
Would you come to me?

And if I'd own tonight
If I could say what's right
You bring me more then light

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

And if I'd lose my mind
Would you sacrifice your time?
And if I'd had to go
Would you be there to bring me back home?
And if I can't make it any better then this
Would this be fine?

And if I'd own tonight
If I could say what's right
You bring me more then light

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

And if your tears had a home
Would it be my eyes?
And if your soul had to run
Would it be to my heart?
And if I'd lose my mind
Would you sacrifice your time?

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

Oh, you know you're bringin' me through
I hope you know you're bringin' me through
It's because of you I can get through

Siana
10-19-2003, 04:37 PM
it's great Lith,very sweet :)

cjme
10-19-2003, 04:48 PM
so beautiful

Dogstar
10-19-2003, 05:10 PM
very sweet, Lithium!

The Lithium
10-20-2003, 09:09 AM
Thanks, I write a lot...

Redeemer
10-20-2003, 10:04 AM
Lith, you've gotten even better since the last time I talked to you....if that's possible!!! Great lyric. Like I said in the "Take me higher" thread, Emelie is hella lucky to have you. :D

The Lithium
10-21-2003, 10:37 AM
Well, I can't say that I feel that way....I just hope I can give her enough! I can't give more then I am, I really wish I could!! So I just feel like I'm happy, and I want Emelie to have whats best, and if she thinks I can give her that, I'm just greatful!!

Redeemer
10-21-2003, 10:47 AM
Lith, the very best you can give her is all of yourself. That's the best anyone can give. Honesty, loyalty, trust,...I know you can give her that. I know you're the happiest dude in the world right now, and I'm happy for you. Hope you guys are the happiest ppl together!! (((HUGS)))

The Lithium
10-22-2003, 03:08 AM
O-YEAH, we're happy! I know that I can't give her more then I am, so I give her everything I can. My life, my love, my soul! :P

Redeemer
10-22-2003, 12:41 PM
Heh heh...you have to stick a little Creed in everything, don't ya?? :P
Btw, when the hell is your new website gonna be up?!?!?!?!?!?

The Lithium
10-22-2003, 02:06 PM
As soon as it's done! :P I think you might have to wait a loooooong time!!

Redeemer
10-24-2003, 12:35 PM
Dammit. :P

The Lithium
10-24-2003, 01:40 PM
Well, that's one way to say it!

whitebird
10-25-2003, 03:20 PM
I check back on the board from time to time, and when I saw that you had posted in the Creative Corner, I read your poem.

It is really very beautiful. There is a great amount of sensitivity in your soul to be able to write this for the girl that you love. I hope much happiness for the two of you.

Sincerely,

whitebird

Redeemer
10-27-2003, 09:55 AM
My sentiments exactly. :)

The Lithium
10-27-2003, 02:00 PM
Thanks again guys! Well, I write a lot...I guess that's my thing. Write, sing and act!

Siana
10-27-2003, 05:21 PM
i'd like to read more of ur poems then :)

creedsister
10-30-2003, 10:20 AM
yea...Extreme....it was so sweet...i almost shead a tear....but i got over it......peace

The Lithium
02-24-2004, 09:12 AM
i'd like to read more of ur poems then :)

Should I send you some more?

Aimee
02-24-2004, 11:03 AM
YES! Please. That was a awesome poem Lith!!

PS WELCOME BACK SIANA!!!!

The Lithium
02-24-2004, 01:27 PM
YES! Please. That was a awesome poem Lith!!

Thank you! :D I can pm you some, I got so many and as you see people use to enyoj them.

By the way... Nice foot! :D :D :D :hammerlol :D :D

creedsister
02-24-2004, 08:51 PM
O-YEAH, we're happy! I know that I can't give her more then I am, so I give her everything I can. My life, my love, my soul! :P awwww Your so sweet for such a little bratt!!! I think you guys Rock !!!!

Aimee
03-03-2004, 03:13 PM
By the way... Nice foot! :D :D :D :hammerlol :D :D

Thanks. No I don't want you to PM me with them. I think you should post them here!!

The Lithium
03-05-2004, 08:28 AM
awwww Your so sweet for such a little bratt!!!

Haha!! Well... Should I thank you for that one??

I think you guys Rock !!!!

I think we suck actually.

The Lithium
03-05-2004, 08:29 AM
Thanks. No I don't want you to PM me with them. I think you should post them here!!

Well, the lyrics are very personal to me, but I can try! :D

creedsister
03-06-2004, 02:06 AM
Well, the lyrics are very personal to me, but I can try! :D Well my 2 cent if there personal to ya bro dont post theme. oh and about the sweet bratt thing. Go Ahead thank me all you want. Well and if u think you and ur Girl Suck!!!...Hahahaha. It All Depends On The Way U look at It Bro......I will shut up now.....Thank God

The Lithium
03-07-2004, 01:11 PM
Well my 2 cent if there personal to ya bro dont post theme. oh and about the sweet bratt thing. Go Ahead thank me all you want. Well and if u think you and ur Girl Suck!!!...Hahahaha. It All Depends On The Way U look at It Bro......I will shut up now.....Thank God

No Sis, you don't understand... We don't rock anymore! We've broke up.

creedsister
03-07-2004, 09:14 PM
No Sis, you don't understand... We don't rock anymore! We've broke up. Oh ok Then it does suck!!! Sorry!!!

PaulMcCoygirl
03-07-2004, 09:34 PM
Your poem is really sweet Lith!

creedsister
03-07-2004, 09:40 PM
Hahaha i know luck to ya now girl ;)

The Lithium
03-10-2004, 10:53 AM
Your poem is really sweet Lith!

Thanks, whatever your name is. (Don't remember it) :o

Hahaha i know luck to ya now girl ;)

Sis, knock it off! ;) :D

creedsister
03-10-2004, 12:27 PM
Thanks, whatever your name is. (Don't remember it) :o



Sis, knock it off! ;) :D now why would i do that its to much fun. but i will be good ;) ROCK ON!!!!

The Lithium
03-12-2004, 11:04 AM
But I want you bad, bad, bad, bad, baaaaaad!!!

creedsister
03-12-2004, 05:28 PM
{ I want U To Want Me I need You To Need Me I want You To Want me] ;) ;) ;) ;) i need u to need me i want you to want me

WeatheredWoman
03-12-2004, 05:30 PM
{ I want U To Want Me I need You To Need Me I want You To Want me] ;) ;) ;) ;) i need u to need me i want you to want me

LMAO!!! Cheaptrick :thumbsup:

Aimee
03-12-2004, 05:41 PM
LMAO!!! Cheaptrick :thumbsup:

I'm gonna see Cheap Trick on APRIL 9th!!! Woo-Hoo! They are coming with Aerosmith (my friend is a huge A fan, and I said I'd go ok, but when I found out CT was gonna be there...yay!)

creedsister
03-12-2004, 06:09 PM
Another WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO Here June Oak Moutian Ampa theatre With dem Boston Boys Areosmith!!!!

The Lithium
03-13-2004, 06:57 AM
Well, if you guys want to know "I want you bad, bad, bad, bad, baaaaad!!" is Offspring! :D

creedsister
03-13-2004, 01:09 PM
Well, if you guys want to know "I want you bad, bad, bad, bad, baaaaad!!" is Offspring! :D Thanks For The Tipp bratt Face And I want U to Want Me Is cheap Trick :D Bratt face ;)

The Lithium
03-14-2004, 09:25 AM
Never heard of 'em :nut:

Peace, The Bratt

creedsister
03-14-2004, 11:56 AM
Not Really A big Fan Myself They Got A just A few Song I Like When Ever You Need Someone To Lay Your Heart And Head Upon Remebear After The Fire After All The Rain I Will Be The Flame THE Flame Cheap Trick :jam: :jam: :jam:

The Lithium
03-14-2004, 01:39 PM
Not Really A big Fan Myself They Got A just A few Song I Like When Ever You Need Someone To Lay Your Heart And Head Upon Remebear After The Fire After All The Rain I Will Be The Flame THE Flame Cheap Trick :jam: :jam: :jam:

How does Cheap Trick sounds?

creedsister
03-14-2004, 05:46 PM
How does Cheap Trick sounds? Well Bratt Face :D Lets See Harder Side Of Pop To Me { They Seem To Be All Melody To Me }

The Lithium
03-18-2004, 03:35 PM
Well Bratt Face :D Lets See Harder Side Of Pop To Me { They Seem To Be All Melody To Me }

Like Goo Goo Dolls?

creedsister
03-18-2004, 04:52 PM
Like Goo Goo Dolls? Yes Some What,
Iris// :D

The Lithium
03-19-2004, 08:05 AM
Yes Some What,
Iris// :D

Slide//:D

creedsister
03-20-2004, 01:08 PM
:rofl: