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CreedGuy16
10-09-2003, 10:55 PM
a kinda happy one i guess, hope ya like it :)

Life I Wont Miss

visions of the past still fading away
still hearing echos of things I didn’t say
I see all of this and sit awhile to rest
feeling some of these burdens free from my chest
but with all of these things now taking place
scars of my past still show on my face
my load has been lightened but is not yet free
wounds iv created still are killing me
the light now shines as I thought it never would
but things still killing like I don’t think they should
they will never go away for they lives on in my mind
still wishing so hard that id left them behinde
but I cant ask for more, lord god iv gained all this
Iv escaped all that life, a life I wont miss

JulieCitySlicker
10-09-2003, 11:00 PM
Very nice creedguy:angel:
I liked it a lot:P

SCOTTSMYMAN
10-10-2003, 10:47 AM
nice poem! I liked it!:)

Siana
10-11-2003, 06:59 AM
that's a good 1:)

Creed_Defaultgirl
11-02-2003, 01:23 AM
this is awesome, I really like! :)

creedsister
11-02-2003, 10:10 AM
Aint No future past in the past creedguy16....it was good well written.....your go boy........peace