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GarrisonMC
11-06-2002, 12:21 AM
So Together

V1.
I've been sitting here thinking
Of all that you said,
And everything about you
That now is dead
To me...

How can a love like ours
Be broken apart
I sit and count the hours
That we're apart
Wandering if I should
Have a change of heart

Ch1.

You and me
We were so together
All the times that we
Shared
All the pains that we
Bared
But it took a little thing,
To tear me from you,
The pain it brings
Is to much to bare
I've tried to find reason,
Do I just not care

V2.

I've lyed awake many nights
Trying to figure out why
I said good-bye,
You were everything I wanted
And now I can't hold you tonight
Because of my jealous pride

I've sat and hated myself over again
For all that has happened since then
And I can't stand this constant pain
That burns me on the inside,
And I realize
You were the brightest
Star in the sky
And now I say good-bye to that pride

Repeat Ch1.

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Gary Plemons
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Siana
11-12-2002, 07:57 AM
it's nice :)

PaulMcCoygirl
11-16-2002, 01:46 AM
How long does it take you to think up of these songs? There are all really good! Wish I could write like that!

GarrisonMC
11-17-2002, 06:33 PM
It usually takes me around an hr to 2hrs to think one up, but this particular one, I thought up the chorus and the rest came to me like that, so i'd say my shortest time would be around half and hour.

than you for your comments

PaulMcCoygirl
11-18-2002, 10:29 PM
You're welcome.....keep up the good work, you are an excellent writer! :)

Siana
11-21-2002, 08:25 AM
agree