1st CATCHY song I've written!!!!

[Wylde-Tremonti]

This song is yet to be titled...i just wrote it on my acoustic....it's the 1st song that the guitar and lyrics have really come together to form a nice melody.... here's the lyrics....pretty simple..

[refrain]
Sittin all alone
Sittin by the phone
wonderin where you are
i know you're not far
-----------------
Where did you go?
I need to know
wonderin where you are
Cuz I'm Searchin for you heart

[palm muted chord interlude]
Cuz I'm searchin for you heart

[Refrain-just chords]

Refrain

I'm sittin here
I'm sittin here
but your not here
[chord outro]

[ZION1010]

Its Cool Be Better if I could Hear it......how about sittin hear for a tiltle that is if you thought of abetter one>>you know what i hate when song gets A title And its not in the lyrics that sucks thats just......my opinon.....this place got a lot of theme here......id like to post a thread in every forum.......when i want your opinon I will be glad to give it to ya ......GOD BLESS GOOD LUCK WITH A TITLE

[katzthatsme]

i know where u got thaat first part lol

[ZION1010]

Originally posted by katzthatsme
i know where u got thaat first part lol Where?

[DangerousDan85]

Creed- Inside Us All

"When I'm all alone
And no one else is there
Waiting by the phone"

[ZION1010]

Okay

[Wylde-Tremonti]

hmmmm....that wasn't a consious thing...LOL....I REALLY DO HAVE CREED ON THE BRAIN...at least my sub-consious!!!

[ZION1010]

Ya know When I First Read It It didnt Hit me

[DangerousDan85]

Originally posted by TremontiWanaB
hmmmm....that wasn't a consious thing...LOL....I REALLY DO HAVE CREED ON THE BRAIN...at least my sub-consious!!!

yeah that reminds me, yesterday i was playing a riff that i thought i made up, but then i kept playing it and it sound familiar, and then i realized, it was from "Ice Ice Baby" which was from the bass line of "Under Pressure" a song by David Bowie and Freddy Mercury.

i mean it wasn't exactly the same, but it was pretty strange

[ZION1010]

I Hated that Song Just As Bad As I Hated That whole year.....Word To ya mutha

[DangerousDan85]

what year was that

[ZION1010]

1990

[Torn Signs]

? :confused:

[ZION1010]

The Year Ice Ice baby Was in Your face ......DD,,,,There said It Sound It like what he was Playing And he Ask What Year the Song Came out Nothing deep

[Torn Signs]

icic

[ZION1010]

Man That Song sucked now It In My head.....i ll Try To Get it out My Head no harm toward Ice God Bless Him i just hated Hes song

[Wylde-Tremonti]

Revision....now it has a name it's called "Alone"
v1
Sittin all alone
Sittin by the phone
wonderin where you are
i know you're not far
-----------------
v2
Where did you go?
I need to know
wonderin where you are
Cuz I'm Searchin for you heart

Chorus:
Sometimes i feel so alone...
sometimes i feel so alone...
Why can't you leave me alone???

v1

chours

v3
are you alone?
are you at home?
cuz i'm wonderin where you are
cuz you've stolen my heart

[ZION1010]

cool

[MrSeeker]

Funny,thats what my one song is called,hehe.

[ZION1010]

Originally posted by MrSeeker
Funny,thats what my one song is called,hehe. yea i know...mrseeker...i too even have a song somewere in ,my 95 folders of lyrics....called alone...its just popular phrase i guess...your alone and wanna bs alone...is two diffrent types of alones...i have experinced both alones...pertaning to that which is written in...wannabs alone and your alone....oh yes theres another alone too.....till now i always got by on my own........Alone HEart......yea its all funny.....peace

[Wylde-Tremonti]

Yeah....i noticed that write after i posted.... Great minds think alike huh?

[ZION1010]

Yea know so,,,,,,,,,,,

[MrSeeker]

They sure do ; )