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SCOTTSMYMAN
08-02-2003, 11:30 AM
Love
For My Husband

What is this strange feeling?
It spins around my head beating.
It ties my stomach in a knot.
It brings me to my knees now and then.
It flies through the window and captures me.
I see you and fall short of words.
I hear you and feel tingles in my skin.
You touch me and I loose my breathe.
This feeling I feel is it love?
I wonder to myself can it be?
Then you smile.
I wonder how can it be anything else.
This feeling that drives me to rapture.
Passions I've never known.
Then I realize.
Love,is all there is.

TeriB19
08-02-2003, 11:34 AM
Kris, I LOVE that one! So touching and so true!!

SCOTTSMYMAN
08-02-2003, 11:36 AM
Thanks Teri. I have more, maybe I'll look for them. I put alot of my writing away and now I can't find it. :)

JulieCitySlicker
08-02-2003, 12:50 PM
I love it to Kris:dancing:

Sheila63
08-02-2003, 04:25 PM
That poem is so beautiful and touching, Kris. I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes. I love it!!:clap: :clap:

ZION1010
08-02-2003, 06:36 PM
NICE POEM SCOTTSMYMAN

SCOTTSMYMAN
08-03-2003, 09:48 AM
Thanks guys! I just really love my guy and that particular day it came out in those words!:):wub:

Siana
08-09-2003, 05:06 AM
Originally posted by ZION1010
NICE  POEM   SCOTTSMYMAN
yep:)