Another poem

[Sheila63]

I was doing some writing this afternoon and wrote the following poem:

Revelation

I see things
in a new and
different light

I see hope and freedom
where there once
was only a glimmer of both

It helps give
me strength to
continue the fight

It renews my spirit
and energizes my
soul to new heights

[hotforscott]

I love it Sheila. It is really good. I still haven't sat down and written anything. Maybe I will get a minute to do so soon. I really like your poems, they make you think. Keep 'em comin' girl, you are very talented.

[Sheila63]

Thank you so much, Carrie.:) Your thoughtful words mean a lot to me. I was doing some journaling before I wrote it. I'd love to read some of your writing if you want to share it.

[HESTLA'S HONEY]

Hi Sheila, :)

I like it!! :banana:

It is very rich with emotion. I love the title. :dancing:

Really feeling the lines;

I see hope and freedom
where there once
was only a glimmer of hope

They speak to me.

Now, I know you are a poet!!

Keep them coming!!

My best to you!!

~Honey~;)

[Sheila63]

Thanks, Honey.:) It's great to hear that my thoughts/words speak to you.:D I appreciate the encouragement too.

[TeriB19]

Sheila, that was fantastic!!

[Sheila63]

Thanks, Teri.:) I'm glad you liked it.

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

I loved this poem too. :angel:

[Sheila63]

Thanks again, Kris.:) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Aimee]

Dang Girl... I think you're just another Wordsworth in disguise ;) But seriously, it's hard to believe you haven't written before, or have you? Maybe when you were younger? Keep 'em comin! This was my favorite line (about hope & freedom)
there once was only a glimmer of both

PS-Carrie, I think you should share too. :2cents:

[Sheila63]

Thank you so much, Aimee.:) I can honestly say that I've never done any writing before, even as a kid. Growing up, I thought I was a terrible writer. It's something I started doing just recently. I've been journaling for about 2 years but I've never done any creative writing before.