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Sam16
06-09-2003, 11:56 PM
Loving Soul

All that Iv learned walking my road
But I cant seem to be rid of this one load
It clings to me like a thorn that cant seem to be removed
It clouds my judgment and makes me feel so confused
It tares away at my soul until only an empty space remains
But I wont let it take her away because of what she contains
Even though this load kills me my soul gives me the little peace I hold
Combine with my spirit it tells me the untold
What don’t some see or refuse it the same
They tell me these things the outside cant tame
It surpasses the mind and all it thinks real
For the mind knows boundaries and the body can only feel
And these things I hold so dear because some will never see
There is more to this person than what is on the outside of me
For that will shortly fade and my soul will remind
That my body is fading but my soul you cannot bind
And then will I have peace and be able to rest
Knowing I did what’s right and chose what was best

JulieCitySlicker
06-10-2003, 12:17 AM
That was really good Sam:P I love reading your poems:dancing:

Higher_Desire
06-21-2003, 09:59 PM
That is a really awesome poem. Good work.


H-D

Hotdoggie
06-23-2003, 01:40 AM
no comment sam, u know how i feel about ur poems!!!!!!
:)

SmEeKy
06-24-2003, 03:00 PM
gosh ur an awesome writer sam and I mean it :)
good job :D

SCOTTSMYMAN
07-10-2003, 02:18 PM
Another masterpiece Sam. I love reading your poems.

HESTLA'S HONEY
07-11-2003, 09:31 PM
Hello,

This is simply an awesome poem. You are very talented!!

Peace.