Poem (I know lol)

[Sam16]

Falling alone

No matter were I turn I always seem alone
But what does it matter for Im weathered to the bone
No one seems to care for they have all found their light
Im not what I seem not everything is right
I want to be engulfed in something besides cold
For falling without help is making me grow old
Iron sharpens Iron and alone kills the soul
To them Im seen as different but that I cant control
I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes
Refusing to see inside is something that they choose
And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse
For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose
Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take
Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was good Sam;)

[Hotdoggie]

Sam, have you ever thought of becoming a writer? I mean that's some excellent material you've got in your poems, I wish I could write like that....Keep up the good work and ALWAYS ALWAYS post your poems 'cause I wanna read them ok???
Never let go of that inspiration, it's the only thing that makes us move on in this world we live in....

[Sam16]

thanks hotdoggie

[Aimee]

Sam, that was a great explanation of feeling like an outsider without the bitterness of hating those who don't understand you. Keep it up!

[Siana]

the poem is really great!

[SmEeKy]

I really like ur poem Sam :)