An original poem by me....

[creedgirl99]

I love writing poems.....here's one I just came up with!


Don't you ever leave me
Don't you ever go
My heart won't make it without you
This is the one thing I know
My heart and thoughts are consumed by you
You know you're the only one
You are the moon and stars at night
You are my morning sun
You are the reason I go on living
My world spins in the palm of your hand
I wish I could tell you how I feel
But there's no way I can
So just know that you are loved
Much more than you will ever know
And that you will always be my everything
If you don't ever go.


I know it's not that great, but it was just a quickie!

[Sheila63]

Not that great?! creedgirl, I love it!! I think it's beautiful.:D

[creedgirl99]

Thank you so much Sheila! :embarass: :D

[Siana]

that's a lovely poem,i like it very much!

[creedgirl99]

Thanks Siana! :)

[JulieCitySlicker]

Creedgirl, I really loved your poem:P Of course it was good girl:dancing: :dancing: :dancing:

[creedgirl99]

:)

[goddess_bb]

Very lovely...Creedgirl..if that was a quickie...geez...you are good..

[Sam16]

Hey Creedgirl, for a quiky that shure is some talent, keep wrighting!

[SmEeKy]

awesome poem creedgirl! :) u should submit it to poetry.com or lovepoetry.com :D

[HigherGirl]

Creedgirl....
That was pretty good!!!
So romantic...awww....:P

[creedgirl99]

:P

[goddess_bb]

Higher Girl is right it is really romantic and fun..you go girl!!!:)

[Luv4Creed]

WoW for a quickie that is a great poem! Great Job :smokin: Girl you were smokin!:cool: Kool!