Tremontichik006
03-04-2003, 07:54 PM
I'm really shy, so i dont like to show my work that much. I write alot, and not just poems. I hope someday to publish a book... but... i dont know... so this is one of my poems i wrote for someone. I hope u guys all like it. Please dont laugh:embarass: i would love to hear some of ur opinions!
I had a dream that you were the one
but now i think that dream is done
yet our destiny is controlled by fate
your silent looks always make me feel so great
Its been awhile but i still think about you
Now i wonder, Do you still think about me too?
I wish i could run up to you, hug you,kiss you
The sad thing is... u dont even have a clue
My feelings for you have become so strong
I cannot believe they have lasted this long
What do you think? What do you say?
Should these feelings remain the same?
I had a dream that you were the one
but now i think that dream is done
yet our destiny is controlled by fate
your silent looks always make me feel so great
Its been awhile but i still think about you
Now i wonder, Do you still think about me too?
I wish i could run up to you, hug you,kiss you
The sad thing is... u dont even have a clue
My feelings for you have become so strong
I cannot believe they have lasted this long
What do you think? What do you say?
Should these feelings remain the same?