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nagpo
11-05-2010, 10:58 PM
Stuck in indecision
Clouds clutter my path
The truth is always hidden
Fear enwraps

Taboos cannot be broken
The walls stand firm
Surrounded in misery
And I hold myself under

You lift me up
And you lift me up
And you put me down
You put me down

Fighting but lonely
The skin begins to peel
This sentence is lengthy
And to this judge I appeal

Seamlessly I awaken
The dog roams the night
He looks to the moon howling
A fang blinded by the night

You lift me up
And you lift me up
And you put me down
You put me down

And the river runs red
The river runs red

You lift me up
And you lift me up
And you put me down
You put me down

The future is not so bright
Lucifer shan't shine its light
Not tonight

TrulyAmazing
11-05-2010, 11:12 PM
very well written loved the way you captured the to and fro, in the closing verses, psalm 19,40,45,50, .....:rockon: reminds me of the hellboy flick, as well,

nagpo
11-05-2010, 11:15 PM
thnx

TrulyAmazing
11-05-2010, 11:22 PM
thnx
your welcome