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nagpo
01-11-2010, 04:32 PM
I aint got time for no game
Aint got time for no fame
I've gotta go on my own

I've got to travel far
No matter where you are
This shining star won't wait for me

With courage and strength
Bravery and contempt
I'm going all on my own

The horizon is my only friend
Travel with it, hold my hand
Take me to the promised land
Where beauty is not rare

I'm heading there
With a lowly stare
I'm missing all I left behind

"But do not fret"
Says one of my friends
"We're coming along for the ride!"

We are our only friends
Travel with us, hold our hands
Taking eachother to the promised land
Where beauty is not, infact, a rarity

Infact it's everwhere I see
In your eyes and in the skyes deep blue mysteries

Oh won't you take me there?
I swear I'll follow you high
Above the clouds into the skys
Because your word is good enough for me

TrulyAmazing
01-13-2010, 09:38 AM
that was very uplifting nagpo super cosmic job Thank You For Sharing It

nagpo
01-13-2010, 06:19 PM
:) I tried to write something very commercial. Something kids could listen to as well as adults.

TrulyAmazing
01-14-2010, 02:22 PM
:) I tried to write something very commercial. Something kids could listen to as well as adults.
:laugh: :laugh: :) yes indeed either way its uplifting nagpo I may wish to revisted this one and look upon it for a while so i guess from a certian prespective that makes it very commercial indeed :rockon: